Тааааак… кто тут с английским на ты?)) Писал сегодня песню… решил куплет на английском написать) бред конечно, с моими то познаниями, но хотелось бы быть уверенным, что нет грубых ошибок)

I want to tell you truth! But it will be lies!
I’m losing myself only in your eyes!
You’re my Paradise! You’re my Angel of Light!
I’m Evil. It’s visible at first sight
You were right! Run from me away!
Without you I won’t survive this day!
You’re my Life! I can’t live without you!
But I disappoint you. It’s everything what I do!
I damn myself for all your grief and pain
But I disappoint you. It’s all what I gain!
You wait for truth, but I have only lies
I want to be myself in your deep eyes
I will be better… Thank’s for your advice
It’s only for you! You’re my Paradise!
I want to be myself in your clear eyes!
I want to tell you truth! But it will be lies!